Classical argument outline

1. The introduction

I will start by introducing accident caused by students and children's internet game addiction, like ;
Last 3.2011 one high school students who had trouble with his parents because of internet game commited suicide when he had a high school entrance ceremony.
Also, I will mention the propotion of teenagers internet game addiction and emphasize the seriousness of korean students game addiction
- According to Wee Center research, 57% korean teenagers do internet game while other countries like taiwan and singapore have 18.1% and 4% of students who do internet game.
 So the governmnet think they have to regulate teenagers doing computer game, expecially at midnight to prevent them from game addiction. Therefore they made a law called 'shutdown law'
Lastly, I want to end it by 'However, that law has many bad side effects. Thus, I think Shutdown law should be abolished.


2. The narration
First, I will explain the standard of game addiction(because someone can say I'm not an addiction even though he is really addicted at it, and it can assure how many game addiction people in Korea.), what is the 'Shutdwon law' and what is the exact purpose of it. Also I will summarize my research about what are the abd things and good things

3. The confirmation

I will display three claims that will support my thesis

1. Not efficient way to protect them from internet game addiction
(source  : http://www.techspot.com/news/46867-korea-bans-kids-from-late-night-gaming-they-dont-listen.html)